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If you're going to put Edward in one of your books, why doesn't he do anything interesting?
...why doesn't he do anything at all?
His sole purpose in The Harlequin seemed to be bringing in his sixteen-year-old stepson Peter (so Peter can get gutted by a weretiger, thanks), bring in Olaf (who is now the creepiest kid in the playground, thanks again), and wangst a bit to Anita about how he doesn't understand love, having a family is slowing him down, yadda yadda yadda.
He never gets to kill anybody. Hell, I don't think he ever even shoots anybody. So much for "the man known as Death," huh.
Yeah, I'm disappointed, how could you tell?
Try again next time,
Me
...why doesn't he do anything at all?
His sole purpose in The Harlequin seemed to be bringing in his sixteen-year-old stepson Peter (so Peter can get gutted by a weretiger, thanks), bring in Olaf (who is now the creepiest kid in the playground, thanks again), and wangst a bit to Anita about how he doesn't understand love, having a family is slowing him down, yadda yadda yadda.
He never gets to kill anybody. Hell, I don't think he ever even shoots anybody. So much for "the man known as Death," huh.
Yeah, I'm disappointed, how could you tell?
Try again next time,
Me
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