I NEED HELP PLEASE <3 PART TWO

[kiaxet]

After getting feedback from a lot of lovely people (thank you all you're all awesome aaaaaaaa ♥♥♥♥♥), I've revised the piece a good bit. The question is, if I posted the revised version again, would you all be willing to take another look at it? I would appreciate you all so much more than I already do (if that's even possible). :Db

Comments

[basiatione.livejournal.com]

WELP I missed it the first time you posted (at work myself!), but I would be happy to go over the revised piece for you. JUST SAY THE WORD.

[kiaxet]

THANK YOU 8D

Just posted it! It should be the next entry up. It is flocked, though, since I'm preparing it for a job and all. |Db

[basiatione.livejournal.com]

OKAY, I will definitely go over it with a critical eye. I'm going to be at work all afternoon, though (sorry), and I see in your previous entry you were planning on submitting your application this evening. SO UH sorry if my critique doesn't get to you until it's too late to revise again!

[starherd.livejournal.com]

Likewise, I didn't get to look at the first version; I'd be happy to see if I spot any flaws for the revision if you want more/different eyes. :-)

[kiaxet]

That would be lovely. :3 Thanks!

Just posted it - it should be the next entry up, and it's flocked since I am working on the piece for a job application.